Strange cases, detective cynder401 in:a horrible murder

The phone rang.
I woke up startled and picked it up.
''Detective cynder speaking'' i said through the phone.
''it's Marisa, you neighbor! his is urgent, come right away!'' she said breathing heavily through the phone.
i told her to calm down and hung up.
I walked over to her place and she was waiting at the doorway.
''thank goodness your here!'' she said.
i walked into her house and sat down.
She started to cry.
''it's...it's... my husband *sniffle*'' she said trying to bring back her tears.
I looked at her curious.
''do you know what happened to him?'' i asked.
She wiped the tears with a tissue and continued.
''well, i was cooking dinner and he went to go to an emergency at his office'' she started still crying a little.
''Then he never came back..'' she continued.
My eyes widened in surprise.
''how long has it been sense he didn't return?'' i asked.
She looked at me with a worried look.
Something was not right and i knew it too.
''i waited 6 hours and he hasn't returned, he only works for 3 hours a day!'' she said.
''Hmmm'' i said, ''I'll get right on it!''
I walked over to the old office.
I stepped inside and the manager walked by to me.
''Ah, detective, we knew you were coming'' he said.
''How did you know....'' i asked with caution.
''Marisa called us and said you were coming'', he said.
A sighed with relief.
The boss didn't seem like a murderer, but then again i didn't know if the man was yet dead.
I walked to his office following him.
He sat down, then i did too.
''tell me, what you know about this'' i said.
He scratched the back of his head.
''well, he said he was going to the bathroom then 6 hours later he never returns'', he told me.
I chuckled.
''he was REALLY constipated'', i sad sarcastically.
I got a little chuckle out of him but then his smile vanished.
''i have a feeling somethings not right here'' he said.
I asked him the question i should have asked first thing,'' have you checked the bathroom yet?''
He shook his head.
I rolled my eyes then made my way to the bathroom.
I did not like going into the mens washroom but i was a detective.
I looked in one of the stalls and gasped.
I could not believe what i saw....

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Oh my god what did you see? I hope its nothing sick, since it was in the washroom XD
Keep writing it!

More!

I almost gagged at what i saw.
It was her husband, with his head shoved into the toilet.
He was bloody, and yeah dead.
The boss walked in here then walked back out again.
He called the police.
They came here in the nick of time.
I had a chat with them, then i studied the body.
It seemed weird that he was stuffed down the toilet.
It was gross, whoever the killer was, they were sick.
I started walking out of the building, when i heard a scream.
I rushed to the office room i heard it from.
There was a dead body on the chair.
Eyes wide open, and bloody sitting on the chair.
The woman was covering her mouth and staring in fright at the body.
''What just happened here?!'' i asked.
The woman started to cry.
''I just walked in here and saw Mrs. Drelles dead!'' the woman said.
I studied the body and noticed toilet paper on the body.
It made me get closer to what was going on here.
Whoever the killer was, was still in this building, planning on who he'll kill next.
I walked around the office building, looking for somebody suspicious.
Suddenly i heard a thump.
I ran to the office room i heard it from.
The thump must have been the fainted man, who saw the next killed victim.
The victim's head was twisted, and bloody.
With toilet paper stuffed in the mouth.

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I was curious to why this was all bathroom stuff.
I walked around some more, and looked for someone.
I sighed, it has been 2 hours and still nothing.
Has the killer given up now?
I shouldn't have said that too soon because then there was a huge boom.......
from the mens washroom.
I sighed and ran over there.
There was another dead body, but head exploded.
The toilet was blown up.
That was seriously freaky.
Then someone touched my shoulder.
I turned around and saw nothing.
I gulped and looked around.
The bathroom door suddenly shut.
I heard the police trying to open the door to free me.
I could feel my heart pumping.
I breathed heavily in fright.
I didn't scream cause i knew that would make matters worse.
I stood still for a moment, and turned around again.
A man with a black mask and suit stood in front of me.
He had a roll of toilet paper with him, and fake claws attached to his gloves.
All bloody.
He stared at me for a moment then he held up his hands.
He lashed at me and i stepped back to dodge him just in time.
I tried looking for a defense.
I quickly grabbed a plunger hoping that would do something.
I lashed it at him and it was stuck on his face.
He tried to get it off as a punched him, and fell to the ground.
I hit him HARD, his head was cracked.
He was killed by me.
The police knocked down the door and looked around.
I gave them a thumbs up and smiled.
Another case complete!

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